Took a bit of a break from the drawing spree to visit other games and stuff, but I thought I'd do some stuff for Battletech while I get back into the job hunt.
Gorgeous. If it had a more angular cockpit it'd be a damn good replacement to the ugly Phoenix redesigns... though I think the Locust is officially reseen-unseen now!
The only designs that remain "unseen" are the ones from Macross. That is because the license holders for those likenesses are squatting on the rights to deny anyone else from enjoying them.
This, and your Warhammer redesign, are your two best pieces of BTech artwork in your portfolio. The Warhammer just because it looks like it's going to kill you simply due to mass (like a juggernaut coming at you), and this one because the redesign is just flat out intimidating. For all that's its one of the lightest of the the lights, this version 'means (serious) business'.
You're pretty much getting a medium laser with legs. I'd recommend the Spider instead- same amount of speed but with jump capability and twin medLasers (Instead of adding machine guns). Then again, I wouldn't take the Spider based on it's looks. Of course, over all of this I'd take a Firemoth if I were going lite.