Really not sure where to go with this now... might just give up and switch to white and rebuild it from scratch (but saving the logos and general ideas of stuff).
This one feels less cluttered, but I don't really like the lines from the central area... if the yellow one could somehow start below (for instance, putting the title at the bottom of the stack) I think it would look better.
I can't tell because of the watermark, but how much does the negative space around the center-graphic make it stand out? Would it be in need of some sort of contrast or does it work?
maybe have the lines feeding in from the different outer areas spread out into a suggestion of a box around your contact details? Not a full box but just a few millimetres either side of the lines. Do you know what I mean? I think that could look quite effective.
EXCELLENT idea, btw, clear, powerful and original, hop it gets you lots of jobs!
Regardless, pretty cool idea.
I can't tell because of the watermark, but how much does the negative space around the center-graphic make it stand out? Would it be in need of some sort of contrast or does it work?
EXCELLENT idea, btw, clear, powerful and original, hop it gets you lots of jobs!